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I have to ask, I'm currently playing the game, so will the mc slap the bitchiness and controlling side of the 'landlady' to oblivion or is it going to continue until later parts of the game? I don't want the femdom genre so please tell me if it's going to be its main genre.

I hoped that femdom can be avoided, but seeing as there's no choices, I hope the mc won't stay pathetic like this. He's being manipulated like a bitch with a carrot and a stick, the irony is he's the one who has a stick literally and I'm hoping he use it to smack the conniving, manipulative and controlling shitstain outta that 'landlady' of his.

Now then, it undoubtedly has the best cg, seeing as I managed to even play it until the dick slapping scene. I'm aware that this is a type of 'grooming' and its wonderfully infuriating. In any case if it's going to be the genre I abhor (femdom), then I'm out, if it's not, then I wish for retribution and make the mc grow out of his.... patheticness. Also answers please, femdom or not? 

I really think you should focus on one platform first, I'd recommend pc first and then the others should follow 'after' you improve the game so you have the gist of how everything works on your game with that particular platform. I say this not because I'm a pc user, I'm an android user and no, I don't have both. I'm sorry to say that your game is very buggy provided that it's still on development phase so you're practically still on test run.

The UI needs improvement, can be quite confusing for new players. I'm on android so I don't know about other platforms. The characters sometimes looks like a ghoul clay maybe because of porting the game into android? The highlights when interacting with things should assimilate its shape on that particular object you interacted to provide some aesthetic in the game and make it neat looking.

The conversation between characters is dry and rushed, maybe add a bit of complexity in their dialogues. I'll wait for your update on this because it is very important if you want your players to adore your characters.

Maybe add an event that will happen when you reach the threshhold needed for the characters to let you do things to them. Let's say Ai needs 10 affection or love points so you can take a bath with her, add a couple more scenes and dialogue to make it more believable that it's fine for you to take a bath with her. I think you can improve the girls' personality, maybe ask for help with this, building a character's personality is real hard. A woman's opinion would really help your character building.

I like the game, it makes you work and actually do something and makes you think for a bit on how you manage your shelter though it's only for a very short time. When Mary wakes up, it's very easy to manage the shelter. The only real thing you need to do is to know when to take a break or return to shelter to catch the girls on the place they like to hang out. 

Lastly, this is more of a friendly reminder rather than feedback. Don't rush the game, you don't have to feel rushed because patrons or people want more content from your game it can ruin your game. Quality over quantity, take it at your own pace, implementing and making ideas takes time. Your game has potential, I just hope you can direct it in the right direction.  I'll watch the game's development with hope and amiability.

Also the first kitchen dialogue where the mc first go there repeats itself if you don't complete the current task which is to obtain the key card.

This is on android only so I don't know if it's the same on other platforms. 

Let's see first bug that I've found, missing key items. What is missing is the bio lab key card. I thought I just missed a particular place and proceeded to tap everything I see on the screen slowly 3x and still can't find it. So I looked for walkthrough and found that it's in the chamber where the mc woke up to at the door besides the fuse. But when I did and tapped there I obtained nothing. I reload and quit and restart the game but still the same so I started a new game where the second anomaly is found. The items you got before your new game can't be obtained cause the place where you get them is cleared out. I cleared my data and this was fixed but I still need to report it. 

In a fight you always have to be dominant, lest you will lose. What I mean is the relationship of the mc with the characters on the town. For example the guild receptionist/master, Elena was it? I forgot sorry. If you flirt will her and 'entertain' her advances on you, she'll dominate you guaranteed. 

It's a good game, good art and I can see a lot of effort and time in the game. Writing a scenario is time consuming than you think and since this is a text based game, well, you get the gist of it. 

Onward to the review, this is a mighty fine game with a lot of gimmicks, status checks that actually do something. A big flaw is the UI especially in android or IOS. Maybe I just lack the finesse on my fingers but it won't hurt to improve the UI right? Also the battle is hard I played both normal and hard but really it's not balanced enough like each time you level up your stats the status of your enemies also grows it's annoying. Finding your enemies weaknesses isn't really doing it's thing in my opinion. Also a lot of enemies is almost resistant to the player's debuffs even if the said inflicting chance is 80% above, dodging is valid but resists it? Its baffling. I ask a lot but I say this in hopes of improving the game.

This game is for masochists the way I see it, you don't have the chance to resist the npcs in the town. I get it, it's the player's job to sleep with the women but it wasn't said you can't take control of a situation or in the bedroom. Almost all of the scenes is the mc is left twitching and unconscious after the deed, sore all over his body, faints trying to resist yet all in vain no chance to retaliate, to take control. Much to my chagrin and cringe. The warning and justification of those contents was stated to be avoidable and yet, Elena's drunk scene and Vivian's charm isn't really avoidable, because the former is 'much' too strong to resist same as the latter. See now, it's unfair if you don't give the males of your game's world a chance to shine cause if this doesn't change the resulting ending of the mc is a meat dildo. Which I hope not your intention.